Book Review: Magic in the Shadows

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Cover by ROC

Magic in the Shadows, Devon Monk (ROC, 2009)

Book three of the Allie Beckstrom Chronicles , 357 pp. At the time of this review (1/29/17), it holds a 4.1-star review on Amazon.

Fantasy, Paranormal and Urban

From the jacket

“Using magic wasn’t as easy as the actors made it look in the movies. Every time you use magic, it uses you back. Sure, you could magic yourself a photographic memory for that big test, for that big interview, for that big stock market job. And all it cost you was a nice case of liver failure. Or the memory of your lover’s name.”

“Magic is Allison Beckstrom’s blessing and curse. As a Hound, she uses her gifts to track down practitioners who abuse their power, and then stops them from inflicting harm on unsuspecting innocents. Unfortunately, her spells have taken a toll on her, physically marking her and erasing her memories—including those of the man she supposedly loves.

But lost memories aren’t the only things praying on Allie’s thoughts. Her late father, the prominent businessman—and sorcerer, Daniel Beckstrom—has somehow channeled himself into her mind. With the help of the Authority, a secret organization of magic users, she hopes to gain better control over her own abilities—and find a way to deal with her father….”

Review

Magic in the Shadows (ROC, 2009) is book 3 of Devon Monk’s urban fantasy series about Hound Allie Beckstrom. It picks up her story up immediately after the conclusion of book 2. Monk does a lot of quick summaries of the major action in book 2, so you’d be able to jump into this story without having read books 1 and 2. That said, I think the experience of book 3 benefits from having felt what Allie put herself in book 2, trying to save her Hound friend and the abducted girls.

Monk deepens the magical roots of her re-imagined Seattle, where magic lives in lightning, flows through the ground. In this story you’ll learn more about how magic finally made its way into the public world, after years of being controlled by a select group of magic users. Now known as the Authority, they serve as the “government” of magic. If they don’t want it getting out, then the public won’t know about it.

Well, unless you’re Allie. Books 1 and 2 have left their mark on her, from the magical tattoos that help her channel her magic to the spirit realm attracted to her when she uses magic—the bits of magic users left behind, and ravenous for magic. It was bad enough when Allie battled memory loss as one of her frequent side effects of using magic; now she’s got to battle them.

Though the Authority has controlled magic, a battle’s brewing. Allie and her friends will be tromping through the middle of that battle as they track the most recent crime disturbing Seattle. With her powers growing, when she taps them, and fighting the Influence of her father in her head, Allie needs help, as hard as that is for this independent woman to admit.

She still calls it like she sees it, and can’t help being curious about magic—like the spelled gargoyles at the hoity-toity restaurant her lover, Zayvion, takes her to for their first date. I love how Monk depicts the gargoyles, and Allie’s relationship with them.

As the designated mother hen for the other Hounds, Allie’s got her work cut out for her. Having inherited that from her deceased friend, she’s walking her own line. And if she wants to use her father’s money to do something good, well, he can sit down and shut up in her brain! That is, if the Authority can teach her to rid herself of him.

The pace clips along in the book, with Monk slowing down during the blossoming (slower, maybe) relationship scenes between Allie and Zay. But this book still has steamy sex scenes when the two get together.

When Monk introduces new characters, I love how she can characterize them through the scents that Allie traces to them as part of her Hound sensitivity to smell. Weaving in bits of backstory as needed, creating characters with attitude, I admire Monk’s world building. I’m fully invested in her characters, and this series.

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Central Ohio Fiction Writers Help All Writers

 

Panel of 5 of the 6 authors who spoke during the "Market Day" presentation

Central Ohio Fiction Writers (COFW) is my local chapter of Romance Writers of America (RWA), and these writers help other writers. Romance writers not part of the local chapter help other writers when they present a writing topic after the business meeting concludes. Members help each other, critiquing pieces to make them stronger. It’s easier to edit another writer’s work than it is to edit my own, and I’ve been an editor (and copy editor and proofreader). After online writer friends critiqued my romance  “Stolen Heart, Stolen Will, and the Wisdom to Know the Difference,” I honed it and began shopping it around. An earlier draft took first in my heat in Round 2 of the 2016 New York City Midnight Short Story Challenge, and showed me that though I’d never considered writing romance, I should step out of my comfort zone. That story is why I’ve checked out COFW.

Author Karin ShahI’d heard about COFW from writer friend Karin Shah. She hooked me on her Chimera Chronicles, which follow the Mara brothers, separated when they were young, and knowing little to nothing about each other based on their age at separation. They can change forms into dragon and lion—but even in their human form, they pack a mean punch. The clock ticks, for they will go feral if they don’t find their mate in time.

A week ago, COFW hosted “Market Day,” where six local authors presented their experiences within publishing—whether self published, small-press published, NYT Bestsellers (now that is an accolade), agent-represented, sans agent, and any other combination. As our moderator said, dozens of the COFW members could have sat on the panel, given how many are published.

Author Karen HarperDuring their stories we laughed, commiserated, and cheered. Karen Harper spoke about her new South Shore trilogy and the marketing strategy—the publisher held the first two back so that the books could be released every other month. Good for readers, not so good for the writer who has to wait for that finished copy. After jumping on-line to read more about the books, I know what’s going on my birthday list!

Karin Shah shared her story of slow progress breaking into print, then success thanks to a friendship. Her beta readers in COFW loved Blood and Kisses, but publishers rejected her. Then, her friend and editor, Deborah Gilbert, decided to launch her own press, Soul Mate Publishing, and snapped up Shah’s book.

In the audience, we nodded. The barrage of rejection letters, whether from book publishers or agents or journal editors, is the “trial by fire” that comes when we think our stories and books are “done” well enough and we send them into the world. In reality, we’d work on them forever, but at some point we have to cut the piece loose and see if it resonates with an agent or publisher.

Author Becky BarkerThanks to all of these writers who presented during Market Day, with additional thanks to COFW, from whom I’ve copied these descriptions:

  • Becky Barker: “award winning author of contemporary romance and romantic suspense who has published works with multiple publishers (Harlequin, Kensington, Samhain, Dell and more) as well as Indie publishing her own work.”
  • Robin Gianna: “author of category romances for Harlequin’s Medical line.”
  • Karen Harper: “NYT and USA Today Best-selling author of historical fiction and contemporary romance. Karen has been traditionally published with Harlequin and other publishers for over 30 years.”Author Susan Gee Heino
  • Susan Gee Heino: “award winning author of witty historical romances, both traditionally published with Berkley Publishing and Indie-Published too.”
  • Donna MacMeans: “award winning author of historical romances, as well as suspense. Donna is traditionally published with Berkley, e-pubbed with Samhain and has self-published too.”Author Donna MacMeans
  • Karin Shah: “author of paranormal romances for e-publishers, Samhain and Soul Mate Publishing.”

 

Learn about Writing at Monthly COFW Meetings

If you’re a writer local to central Ohio, come to a COFW meeting and see if they’re a fit. The first hour is business, and the next two hours are a program. I may only be testing my wings in romance, but the first two programs have been beneficial. In fact, they’d be beneficial regardless of what I’m writing. Upcoming presenters sound fabulous. Take a look at Februarys Meeting or March’s special day-long event in German Village ($10 for non-COFW members).

Once you’ve come out to a meeting or two, be brave and talk with members, and see whether this may be a writing “tribe” that works for you. Each author I’ve spoken with has made me feel right at home. Being an introvert, I cherish that. Sure, I know we have writing in common, but I also have to feel like I have something in common with the writers as people. November, the first meeting I attended, one of the members wore the skull scarf she had crocheted. I loved it!

Author Robin GiannaThis January meeting, when I started to join into a conversation about membership recruitment (me being a prospective member and all), others spoke at the same time. I fell silent. During the next lull, an author behind me, Robin Gianna, encouraged me to speak.

I added another mark in the “pro” column for joining COFW. When I left at the conclusion of the program, another writer asked, “will we see you again?” That led to a side-conversation, and we chatted about what we’re working on. Yep, I’ve joined as an “Associate Member,” hefty fee for RWA and all.

Come check out COFW at their next meeting, Saturday, February 18th, in Hilliard, Ohio. The topic is “Simplify and Thrive: Declutter your Career,” where author Donna Alward will present how you market yourself as an author while still finding time to write your books. Given that I’m struggling with that balance across my Facebook page, this author page, and twitter (@SEHBicycle), I’ll be learning from her—and there’s even more once you become published, like book tours and giveaways and Facebook parties.

There you go, writers, helping writers. Thank you, Central Ohio Fiction Writers (COFW), for the impact you’ve had on the Ohio writing landscape since 1987.

How has someone helped you? If you’re a writer, have you found a like-minded tribe to support you, push you, cheer for you? I’d love to hear your stories.

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Shiny New Years Sans Resolutions

It’s here, that Shiny New Year, full of promise. Full of resolutions, goals, dreams, whatever you want the New Year to become. I’ve never been big on New Year’s Resolutions, so it was with tongue in cheek when I offered a winter ride called “New Year’s Resolution Ride” (NYRR) the first Saturday after the New Year, followed by “New Year’s Resolution Reinforcement Rides” (NYRRR) two or three days in January. As a winter ride leader, I offered these rides several years–until last year, when I realized I needed to lead fewer rides, and focus more on riding while writing.

A tiny slice of forest, trees bare of leaves.

My spring-summer-fall writing view awaits winter’s end. Still pretty, but too cold to write out here.

I contemplated New Year’s Eve invitations, my traditional New Years Day participation in the Westerville Bike Club’s ride, and my writing. This year, writing and a shorter workout won out. I haven’t resolved to work out more in 2017, but I have been working on finding the precarious, difficult balance of writing/riding/running/gardening + all the other “adulting” tasks. I hadn’t run since Thanksgiving, so I decided that this year I’d begin it with a run rather than a ride, and spend even more time writing now that the chaos of Christmas had ended.  I write because I love it, it’s in my blood, and I have dreams of seeing my books enjoyed by readers across the world. It takes hard work to make any dream a reality. Good thing I come from a family where hard work serves as the foundation of everything we do.

“Aim for the stars,” as one of my favorite bookmarks says. “You may not reach them, but you’ll fly far higher than if you had never aimed.” So long as I’m having fun writing, despite the added pressure of the day job, I’ll continue to write, and chase that dream of seeing my name in print; of smiles, tears, and laughter from readers.

I suited up for the low thirties, grabbed the freshly charged Garmin, and set a modest goal of running and walking two miles. Out I went. On the third interval of six minutes running, the lack of fitness base showed. Out came my first trick: ok, run thirty more seconds.  That goal met, and I still hadn’t had a form break big enough to feel, my lungs burning, I set the next goal: the mailbox a hundred yards upstream. That met, the traffic light another sixty yards away.

Shari stands in her bicycling jersey before the forest

I’m back from my bracing NYD run/walk.

Gasping, huffing warm air that fogged my glasses, I made the turn for home. I knew I didn’t have another six minute-interval in me given the last set, but maybe I could do a shorter run/walk interval if I gave myself two minutes to recover. I set the plan: run one hundred paces, walk one hundred, borrowing from what I’d learned training up to seven miles in the spring. With extra walking for the cooldown, my shiny New Year’s Day exercise finished at a pleasing 2.3 miles.  I welcomed this shiny New Year with endorphins from my run, got to cooking a chicken noodle soup, and hunkered down to write.

 

Find Your Tribe

Writing may be lonely, solitary work, but it takes a tribe to produce a kick-butt piece. Introvert though I am, I’m taking the advice of the published authors who have talked at Westerville Public Library, Upper Arlington Library, Worthington Public Library: find your tribe, the writers who “get” you, your type of writing, our challenges. We’re stronger for that tribe.

A fantastic writing friend, Kim D. Bailey, invited me to join a private Facebook group to track our fitness, committing to a healthier 2017.  A bunch of us are writers, all struggling to re-find that balance of looking out for our own physical well-being while we chase our dreams that have us so sedentary. Writer S.C. McCole then invited us to set goals for fitness. I’m committing to a realistic four workouts a week the first two weeks; then I’ll set the next goal after I see how I’m doing.

To help me in that, I borrowed a page from another writer friend, paranormal romance writer Karin Shah. She’s adjusted the mantra BISHOK (or something like that—butt in seat, hands on keyboard) to log treadmill time while writing. She’s covered distances up to seven miles at a time, hammering out the stories of the Mara brothers who star in her Chimera Chronicles.

treadmill with boxes bungie corded to make a platform for keyboard. Computer on a DVD holder.

Jury-rigging the solution to see the computer, type on the wireless keyboard, and get in a workout.

My jury-rig requires two bungie cords, a banana box, and a deconstructed box. It’s not the best solution, but it is one that allows me to walk at a reasonable rate and type. The attempt to use my Dragon Naturally Speaking to dictate while walking, however, didn’t work. The software picked up the old treadmill’s hum as endless repetitions of “him” and one word from the sentence I said about how MILC  (A government division chasing Magic, incantations, legends, and curses) camouflages their entrance in a dump. The word it caught, “stench,” made me laugh.

Thanks to the treadmill time, I also met one more goal, carving out more time for agent research. This weekend, I submitted to Caitlin Blasdell of Liza Dawson Associates (and, now I’m a fangirl of Sarah Prineas, check out her young adult books Ash & Bramble and Rose & Thorn). My dream is to find an agent who represents fantasy across adult, young adult, and middle grade. Ideally, the agent represents women’s fiction. The picture I form of the agent in reading her or his bio, interviews, client list, and tweets must make me feel like our personalities would mesh.

 

Roll With the Setbacks

Not every shiny New Year’s plan or resolution goes off without a hitch. If it did, where would the fun be? And gyms wouldn’t see a crush of participation the first week that falls off in the second week, and plummets in the third and fourth weeks. A handful survive their resolutions long enough to make them a new habit.

The joint goal of exercise and finishing the rough draft of Solve for x by April 30 met the first setback at yesterday’s regularly schedule massage therapy appointment. Therapist Christine Graham found all sorts of muscle tightness I didn’t realize had started, and the only new thing in the routine was the treadmill typing.  Until I find a successful way to dictate, I’ll leave the “writing” behind when I step foot on the treadmill. This means I must stay diligent in hitting the workout first thing in the door, before dinner, and therefore before I set fingers to keyboard.

small creek lined with large rocks protecting the creek banks

The calming beauty of the creek, flowing with the above-freezing temperatures

That setback aside, a week and a half into my shiny new year, and I’m feeling grand sans resolutions, but with goals and actionable plans. The trick, I know, is to re-establish this workout habit while writing and editing, and not letting the house chores slide. With my online group, I’m accountable, and that’ll help keep me honest and on track.

How shiny is your new year? Have you set goals, made resolutions, or done anything else to keep you on a path to happiness? What is it? I’d love to hear your story.

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